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Message par No pity for a coward. le Dim Mai 03 2015, 08:43

What if this is just a dream?
What if reality is nothing but a fantasy?
I have been searching and breathing but not living.
I have seen the love of power and souls taken just for the sake of winning.
I loved, I cried, I laughed and prayed.
For the person who left without a choice or just wanted to fade.
What if our insecurities and hatred were killed? 
What if war was a cup full of rainbows that have been filled? 
I saw, I smiled, I touched and still hoping.
That with the emptiness inside, I am coping.
 

It's just a working progress that I just wrote, *felt like sharing something I have never written before*, it's not good but okay, not finished and Idk if I should finish it or change it. Just felt the need to share something, anything.
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Message par brokendreams le Lun Mai 11 2015, 14:27

J'ai bien aimé ce que tu as partagé..
A travers ces lignes, on arrive à imaginer ce que tu as pu traverser, ce que tu as pu vivre et ressentir...c'est profond... continue... cheers 

Ces lignes sont celles qui m'ont touché le plus :
I have seen the love of power and souls taken just for the sake of winning.
I loved, I cried, I laughed and prayed.

What if war was a cup full of rainbows that have been filled? 
I saw, I smiled, I touched and still hoping.
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Message par No pity for a coward. le Sam Mai 16 2015, 09:52

Thank you! Your comment is highly appreciated.
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