Extrait d'une fiction...
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Extrait d'une fiction...
Cold summer night wind caressing my body, shinning stars and inpiring waves sound caressing my thoughs... The more i think, the less i share what i'm thinking of with people, not because i'm selfish but the magic i feel i could never describe it enough to make them see what i see. That's what makes me different i guess... I love sitting on the hot sand touching it passionately and waiting for the salt water to come kiss my feet. I love summer... It was monday, and i had one week till the end of paradise, i was swimming, enjoying the last moments of this magical summer, the last mouth before my twenties -Sad maybe cause i don't want to grow up that fast- when i saw this bonny creature smiling at me, my heart beated so fast i though i had a heart attack, i smiled back at her and i knew i fell in love. The eye contact made me feel so... ugh i can't even define what i've felt, i went crazy and i did everything i could to see this smile again...
Black long hair, tanned skin and kissable lips, "The first time i saw you, i knew you're different, you're the dream for me, you're the one" - she said. We had 6 days to prove our love for each other, 6 days and few seconds to make a lot of memories, time was an illusion and we knew for sure that this summer will change our lives forever.. she's my forever...
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nane_ou- Novice
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All I could think of was Lana del rey! Summertime, few days and maybe weeks of love etc .. I loved it!
No pity for a coward.- Novice
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Exactly !! i was listening to her music when i wrote that
I'm glad you like it
I'm glad you like it
nane_ou- Novice
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She is a queen
No pity for a coward.- Novice
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nane_ou a écrit:Exactly !! i was listening to her music when i wrote that
I'm glad you like it
Very well-written nane_ou, deep and heartfelt...Drop me a line sometime, writing is a passion to me
ladybug2980- Habitué
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